BDSM is my Normal
Author Carnaldesire
3.39 million views
Okay, aside from the fact that I know Wattpad authors don't use up a lot of time editing their stories, this one is something else ENTIRELY.
What do I think of this book?
Honestly, I haven't gotten past chapter 3. The description of the story makes it sound like it's going to be really good, but once you start reading. It's like BAM! here we go. From 0 to 100 in less than 2 pages. No buildup whatsoever.
The author even has a whole introduction about how she's writing about the lifestyle as she knows it. That she's done her research. "Don't compare mine to Fifty Shades Of Grey". Oh, dear god! She warns anyone NOT to correct her grammar, or anything else for that matter.
Just 3 chapters. And I know I should probably tough it out and read the whole thing to give it a proper review, but bite my ass, I don't think I'm going to. Gah!
First scene, guy roommate comes home, immediately tells the girl to go to the bedroom. Once in there, he starts making demands. Strip. Lay down. Open your legs for me. Handcuffs her to the bed without ANY discussion as to what the hell is happening beforehand. Big mistake there, Miss. And just starts whipping out toys and increments that she has no clue about, and starts using them. But if course, she's not all "Omg, what's going on?" It's more like, "Oh, wow this is best sex I've ever had. With any man. Ever!" And at that part, they've barely got past the foreplay. Seriously?
My suggestion, don't bother. How in the world it has over 3 million views is beyond me.
Overall Rating: (out of 5 stars)
0- The author can't write well and doesn't know enough about the lifestyle she is choosing to write about. Enough said.
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